This came to me in the middle of my Creative writing class after i heard my friend turned eighteen and said he wanted to buy a pack of cigarettes just because he could. (he hates cigarettes by the way)
HERES THE POEM:
Cigarettes
Living, hard to find my way.
It was a simple act that left me this way.
My heart urns for something strong.
Something that was to crutch me for so long.
And yet i find that it will never end.
My darkness follows
Hears unsure;
now is now,
then is then...
i.e. ive never smoked before, infact i hate it when people even smell like smoke. its a discgusting habit. im writing this poem in the perspective that i have been smoking for years and i ended up quiting. ive never smoked though...
It's O.K.,but not impressive.
Weak beginning lines
Hears unsure??? or Years unsure?